The notes, headed with a working title, list the family members and background, although names and details—Charles is not married and his sister is Teresa, not Bella—were to change:
Death of Martha Digby [Emily Arundell]
The Digbys—their family history
Miss Martha—Miss Amelia—Miss Jane—Miss Ethel and Mr Thomas
Marriage of Mr Thomas—to a barmaid?
Mr John [Charles] and Miss Daphne (T’s children)
John—stock exchange—married—his wife clever woman
Daphne [Bella] marries an Armenian? Dr. Mendeman [Tanios]—charming man—his wife quiet, cold
The early chapters of the novel are accurately sketched with only minor differences—the chemist is delayed until Chapter 21 and there is a cryptic reference to painting in connection with Theresa:
General Plan
P. receives letter—he and H [astings]—he writes—then he tears it up—No, we will go—Market Basing—The Lamb…Board to be let or sold. Visit to house agents—an order to view—Ellen conversation—rap—rap—rap—a ball drops down staircase terrier wagging his tail
The chemist—his remembrances—they pretend that are writing up a history of the town—he is an amateur archaeologist—the history of the family. P goes to doctor—as a patient (and an archaeologist) doctor comes to dine—a good deal of local gossip—some little mystery about that death? Doctor indignant—perfectly natural causes—he says—well, I should think you’d be satisfied now. P. says ‘But she died’
Theresa—flat in Chelsea—painting—her engagement to Dick Donaldson—latter wants to specialise— infection—liver—serum therapeutics
Oddly, there are references to Peggy, rather than (Ara) Bella, in both of the following extracts. This was probably an early name choice for the character, as the clue of the symmetrical letter seen in the mirror, M for Margaret, would still work with it. As we have seen, this device was considered in conjunction with the plotting for
Another visit to the terrier—to the Tripps—hallucinations etc.—evidence of the cook—Miss Theresa on stairs that night—a piece of thread—yes, Ellen had found it. Miss Lawson again—money missing from drawer—knew who took it. P. bullies her a bit—she gets rattled—talks about poor Peggy—who has left her husband
Peggy again—about husband—she refuses to say—P. says tell me—I’m going to be in danger—she refuses to say anything. H. says ‘she knows something’—asked about dressing gown—says yes—she has a dark blue silk one —Theresa gave it to her. When? When we were all down that weekend, Which day? I can’t remember
And a page of letters and names experimenting with symmetrical letters, the vital clue as misinterpreted by Miss Lawson, eventually arrives at the required one:
ARABELLA A.T. BELLA T.A. Arundel
An elegant restaurant, a glamorous birthday party and beautiful Rosemary Barton is poisoned during the toast. A year later, in a macabre reconstruction at the same restaurant and with an almost identical party, there is another death. But who was the intended victim? Colonel Race investigates.
Notes for
There are structural similarities to
The most concentrated notes appear in Notebooks 13 and 63 with 18 pages each. The other eight Notebooks that feature
Remembered Death ‘Here’s Rosemary—that’s for Remembrance’
Book I
‘Sweet as remembered kisses after death’
What must I do to drive away remembrance from my eyes?
Beginning of In Memoriam
Rosemary
Iris…shadows—the beginning of it all
Book
Remembered Death—girl’s name is Rue
Remembered Death
Rosemary (dead)—husband—George Barton—acts very suspiciously—he is a businessman
Stephen Fane [Faraday]—R’s lover
Lady Mary Fane—his wife—cold proud clinging jealous
Tony Getty [Tony Morelli aka Anthony Browne]—former lover of R’s apparently in love with Viola [Iris]
Ruth Chambers [Lessing]—George Barton’s sec[retary]—efficient girl—may be in love with him
Lucilla Drake—old pussy—cousin—lives with them—has a son in S. America—ne’er do well
Murder (of George or V[iola]?) by son who is secretly married to Ruth
Col. Race on job
In Notebook 63 we see the novel beginning to take shape, with six characters thinking about Rosemary:
Remembered Death Six people are remembering Rosemary Blair [Barton] who had died last November
Sandra—R. her hatred of her—her suspicion that St. doesn’t care for her
Iris—puzzling it out—letters etc.—George’s manner—Anthony’s coming—the Faraways [Faradays]