Miss Barrett,
The following suggestions are unofficial: they will not appear on my formal Observation Report. If you wish a personal conference, please see me.
1. Windows should be open about 4 inches from the top, to avoid danger of students leaning out.
2. Relating questions to the pupils' own experiences is first rate, but don't let them run away with you. They often do it to delay or avoid a lesson. Example: in connection with making a choice, the discussion of whether or not girl in 4th row should wear her print or her green chiffon Saturday night was interesting, but 6 minutes on it was excessive.
3. Don't allow one student (Kagan?) to monopolize the discussion. Call on the non-volunteers too.
4. Always ask the question first; then only call on a student by name, thus engaging the whole class in thinking. Avoid elliptical, loaded or vague questions, such as: 'How do you feel about this poem?' (too vague) and 'Do we regret what we haven't done?' (The answer the teacher wants must obviously be yes!)
5. Your unfailing courtesy to the students is first rate. A teacher is frequently the only adult in the pupil's environment who treats him with respect. Instead of penalizing suspended boy who came in late, with toothpick in mouth, you made him feel the class had missed his contribution to it. That's first rate! (He should, however, have been made to remove the toothpick.)
6. 'Note the simplicity of Frost's language,' you said. You might try the excellent device of pretending ignorance or surprise: 'But I thought a poem had to have fancy words!' or 'But isn't an adverb supposed to end in ly?' or 'But doesn't Mark Antony say nice things about Brutus?'
7. The boy next to me was doing his math. It is wise for the teacher to move about
the room.
8. Immediate correction of English was effected. However, you missed:
'He should of took the road . . .'
'On this here road . . .'
'He coont make up his mind.'
9. Enthusiasm is contagious. I'm glad you're not ashamed to show you are moved by emotion or excited by an idea. Unexpected intrusion of outsiders (plumber, etc.) need not necessarily curb this enthusiasm.
10. The less a teacher talks the better the teacher. Don't feed them; elicit from them. Learning is a process of mutual discovery for teacher and pupil. Keep an open mind to their unexpected responses. Example: comment of boy doing math that man has no choice.
11. Don't allow the lesson to end on the wrong note. Example: your question 'What kind of man was Frost?' elicited the answer: 'The kind of man who likes to write poetry.' Just then the bell rang and they were dismissed.
12. Your quick praise of pupil effort and your genuine interest in what they say are first rate! It's fine for the girls to emulate you and for the boys to try to please you. But there are certain hazards in looking too attractive.
There is no question in my mind but that you are a born teacher.
INTRASCHOOL COMMUNICATION
FROM: 304
TO: 508
Dear Bea—
We have met the enemy, and he is ours!
I knew I'd be observed today and was prepared. At least, I thought I was.
There is a heading: 'Anticipation of Difficulties' in the model outline, but I had difficulties I hadn't anticipated.
A boy got hiccoughs and almost fell out of the window; there was a false emergency drill signal; McHabe came to make an announcement; and the plumber dropped in to hammer on the radiator.
Bester sat and scribbled away at the back of the room, while I tried to keep in mind simultaneously 39 kids, lesson-plan, room passes, boardwork, Frost, troublemakers, scraps of paper on the floor, correcting their English, and enlarging the scope of the lesson to include moral and ethical concepts.
I didn't have time to cover half of the things in my Plan Book, and I forgot Summary and Windows, but I did ask 'pivotal questions,' linking the poem to their own experiences. Bester says I'm a born teacher! Congratulate me!
INTRASCHOOL COMMUNICATION
FROM: 508
TO: 304
Dear Syl,
Of course you are. A born teacher, I mean.
Linking a lesson to their own experiences is fine if you can do it, but sometimes it's a strain. I recall a young teacher whose opening question on Wordsworth's poem to a class of tough city boys in a vocational high school was: 'How many of you have seen a sea of daffodils lately?'
Naturally, congratulations!
Dear Miss Barrett,
I’ll be absent tomorrow due to sickness so please let some one else read these minutes I took on today's lesson.
It was a most interesting and educational English period. Miss Barrett collected money for the Scholastics and any one who doesn't bring it tomorrow won't get it. Miss Barrett read some notices about the G.O. and Mr. McHabe came in to speak about no sneakers on cafeteria tables. Miss Barrett sent Roy out of the room for spitting out of the window to cure hiccups and thought us a beautiful poem by Mr. Robert Frost. The title was called 'The Road Not Taken'. Dr. Bester visited us. He sat next to Fred.
We discussed our different turning points in life. Vivian's turning point was college or work after graduation? This was not a good example because she is only a soph. Linda's turning point was about which dress to wear Sat. night. Eddie's turning point was when he went to the cellar and got hit on the head. Lou had no turning point.
The poet tries to say that because he took the road this made a lot of difference. He tells about yellow wood. He decides to take a walk and takes a wrong turning point and gets lost and sighs. The moral is we can't walk on two roads at the same time. Some people in class disagreed.
The poet (Mr. Frost) teaches us about life and other things. He was simple. He was economical and died recently. He blazed a trial on a new road.
Miss Barrett passed around his picture but it got only to the first row because some wise guy hogged it and wouldn't pass it. Multim im parva means he says very little. Trodden means walk.
His style was very good. He had his eye on things.
In my last term's English class we had to put poems under different Headings like Poems of Love and Friendship, or Nature and God's Creatures, or Religion and Death, and say where they belong to, but I'm not sure where this one belongs to.
