39–40 Stanzas 39 lines 5–8 and 40 lines 1–4 echo VIII.30.
39–50 Elements in the arrangement of dialogue are altered in the Lay, and the development set in a clearer light and sharper focus. Brynhild’s lie to Gunnar, that Sigurd had possessed her (43), leads to his words to Hogni (46): ‘oaths he swore me, all belied them’, which are almost the first words of the
51–64 There were two distinct versions of the story of the murder of Sigurd, each represented in poems of the Edda. In the
In this poem is told of the death of Sigurd, and here the story is that they slew him out of doors; but some say that they slew him within doors, in his bed, sleeping. But German men say that they slew him out in the forest; and so also it is told in
The Saga follows the story of his death as he slept in the house, and the Lay likewise adopts this version, but introduces (54–57) a brief episode in which Gotthorm encountered Sigurd as he hunted in the forest, and hailed him abusively – perhaps to give colour to what is said in the Saga, and repeated in stanzas 52–3 – that the diet of wolf and snake on which he was fed made him exceedingly bold and fierce.
51 Grimhild’s offspring: the author of the Saga regarded Gotthorm (
58–59 In the Saga, Gotthorm went twice to Sigurd’s chamber in the morning, but Sigurd looked at him, and Gotthorm dared not attack him on account of his piercing gaze; when he came the third time Sigurd was asleep.
67–69 These stanzas echo the concluding verses of the
73 In the Saga, following
77 Lines 5–7 are an exact repetition of lines 3–5 in III.13, where the ‘son’s son’ is Sinfjotli, except that the reading there is
77–82 The concluding passage is of course peculiar to the Lay. With stanzas 79–81 cf.
77–78 In a fragmentary poem of the tenth century on the death of the ferocious Eirik Blood-axe, son of King Harold Fairhair and brother of Hakon the Good (see the note on V.54) there is a remarkable image of the coming of an ‘Odin hero’ to Valholl. The poem opens with Odin declaring that he has had a dream in which he was preparing Valholl to receive a company of the slain. There is a great noise of many men approaching the hall, and Odin calls on the dead heroes Sigmund and Sinfjotli to rise up quickly and go to meet the dead king who is coming, saying that he believes it to be Eirik.
Sigmund says to Odin: ‘Why do you hope for Eirik, rather than for other kings?’ And the god replies: ‘Because he has reddened his sword in many lands.’
Then Sigmund asks: ‘Why have you robbed him of victory, when you knew him to be brave?’ And Odin answers: ‘Because it cannot be clearly known. . .’ – and then (at any rate as the text stands) he breaks off, and concludes: ‘The grey wolf is gazing at the dwellings of the Gods’ (see the commentary on the
Note on Brynhild
In what follows I set out, with minor editing, the content of some notes of my father’s, written very rapidly in soft pencil and difficult to read, on his interpretation of the tangled and contradictory narratives that constitute the tragedy of Sigurd and Brynhild, Gunnar and Gudrun. I will repeat here what I have said in my Foreword, that there is nothing in these or any other notes for his lectures on Old Norse literature that bears on the question of whether he had written, or intended to write, poems on the subject of the Volsung legend; but that views expressed in the lectures may illuminate, naturally enough, his treatment of the sources in his Lays.
In my commentary on the last part of the Lay I referred (p.234) to my father’s belief that the fragment of a Sigurd lay known as the
(1) A semi-magical personage, ultimately derived from a Valkyrie legend.
(2) She surrounded herself with a wall of flame, and vowed only to wed the hero who rode it – intending it to be Sigurd.
(3) The wall of flame
(4) Her comfort fails and her pride is mortally wounded when she discovers that it was Sigurd after all who rode the flame: in addition she has been tricked into breaking her oath to wed the actual rider.
(5) Her vengeance takes this form: she cannot have Sigurd now, and therefore she will destroy him (and so mortally wound Gudrun, the natural object of her hate); but she will by this very act avenge herself on Gunnar by involving him in a dreadful oath-breaking – so that after all is over, Sigurd dead, and she about to follow, she can turn and say, ‘Sigurd is pure of all such vileness, you Gunnar alone are shamed’ [this is the end of the