yet.

Jenny

[JOE WRITES: Super short, like two or three sentence scene where Jenny approaches the huge shaped charge that has landed on the helipad.]

Clayton

[PAUL WRITES: After Adam’s detonation, Clayton Theel goes back down for his Tauras, instead of running out to safety when he could’ve made it) and big, big boom.]

Joe and I talked just now, and here’s what we’re thinking in terms of finishing, because the deadline for getting this book to reviewers is fast-approaching:

Wednesday, 9/22: Paul, Jeff, Joe write and finish above scenes

Thursday, 9/23: All complete the last two scenes and finish novel

Friday, 9/24: Finalize all bonus content, and off to Jeff for his final review.

Saturday, 9/25: Jeff goes through book, incorporating any changes

Sunday, 9/26: Jeff goes through book, incorporating any changes

Monday, 9/27: Paul goes through book, incorporating any changes

Tuesday, 9/28: Paul goes through book, incorporating any changes

Wednesday, 9/29: Joe goes through book, incorporating any changes

Thursday, 9/30: Blake goes through book, incorporating any changes

Friday, 10/1: Blake goes through book, incorporating any changes

Saturday, 10/2: Joe formats book first thing…off to my proofreader

Sunday, 10/3: Return of proofed book (hopefully not too late), update any bonus content, make absolute last changes, etc.

Monday, 10/4: Joe sends the book to Rob Siders for Kindle formatting, I send the book in 3 formats in an email blast to the troops.

Sound okay? In particular, let me know if the proposed 2-day review periods for you, Jeff and Paul, will work with your schedules.

Blake

September 22, 2010

That timeline works for me.

Jeff

• • •

Strand Has No Shame. “Part of the clown. He tasted funny.”

Paul

• • •

Heh heh. And if you look through all of my prior novels, most of which are horror/comedies, you will almost NEVER find that kind of joke. But it’s very much a Joe Konrath type of joke, so I figured, what the hell? :)

Jeff

• • •

Clay and Alice is up.

As for my comb-through of the ms, I can do any days but Monday and Tuesday. So please switch me with someone. I can do the weekend before or Wed-Thur after.

Paul

• • •

Don’t blame me for that one, Strand. It was all you. And I, for one, hang my head in sorrow at the depths you’ll plumb for a cheap laugh. Shame on you, Mr. Strand. Shame shame shame.

Joe

• • •

Are you STILL practicing medicine, Paul? Isn’t the board supposed to take your license away when you turn 90?

I kid because I love.

I can switch days with Paul.

Joe

• • •

I’m devastated. This was a serious, character-driven meditation on the horrors of modern medicine, until that unforgivable attempt to appeal to the lowest common denominator of readers.

Blake

• • •

You guys DID notice that Joe added a “Talk about a half-assed injury!” joke to Paul’s first section, right? :)

Jeff

• • •

I thought that was another one of your jokes.

Joe

• • •

Jeff - can you switch your manuscript review days with Paul? We only gave Joe 1 day to review. That would mean Paul reviews Sat./Sun, you review Monday/Tuesday.

Blake

• • •

Yep, absolutely.

Jeff

• • •

Re: Jenny scenes: Great stuff! But when Jenny asks Randall to bite her neck, we sort of stop being the anti- TWILIGHT.

Jeff

• • •

I think Randall needs to glow in that scene.

Joe

• • •

Want me to start writing a Shanna/Driscoll scene up to where the hospital blows up?

Paul

• • •

Let Jenny say, “This isn’t a Stephanie Meyer book!”

Blake

• • •

Absolutely. We still need to work Shanna’s quarantine issue out (If she’s in Q she can’t meet Mortimer)…do you kill Clayton in your scene, and did you like the idea of a painful but quick test to tell if Shanna has been infected, which keeps her out of Q?

Blake

• • •

I’ve never seen or read Twilight. Is there really a “bite me in order to stay alive” scene?

In Randall’s case, he pushes her away, so it might not be similar. But then, if it were my husband, I’d want him to bite me.

Joe

• • •

Okay, Jeff brought this up, so here’s an uncomfortable question…Jeff…have you read or seen TWILIGHT? Because if there actually is a bite me to stay alive scene in Twilight and we use it to make fun of TWILIGHT, well,

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